Basketball
Basketball is a good exercise, I like it very
much, in the begin I am just a rookie, but I practice a lot, now I
am a good basketball player.
I like play basketball after school, because
there are many people play there, so I can play with them and I can
learn how to play better, I also can make friend by play games with
them, on holiday I always play basketball with my cousin, he is a
good player, too, but he like to shot by himself, I don’t like this,
I like play in a team which is good and nice.
Why am I like plat basketball? Because I love
NBA, first I see NBA is in my elementary school grade 6 so I begin
to play basketball, to now, I always play basketball when I have
time, maybe I can play with you too, teacher, but I think I will
lose because you are too high.
Basketball
Playing basketball is a good way to exercise, and I
like it very much. In the beginning, I was just a rookie, but after
practicing a lot, I have become a good basketball player.
I like playing basketball after school, because there
are many students at the basketball court, so I can play with them
and improve myself. I can also make friends by playing games with
them. In the holidays, I always play basketball with my cousin, and
he is a good player, too. However, he likes to shoot by himself, and
I don’t like this. I like playing as a team, which is good and nice.
Why do I like to play basketball? It is because I
love the NBA. I first watched the NBA when I was in elementary
school grade 6 and I began to enjoy the sport, till now. I always
play basketball when I have time. Maybe I can play with you too,
teacher, but I think I will lose because you are too tall..
Basketball
Playing basketball
(It must be “playing basketball…” because “basketball” is just a
ball, and it can’t exercise you) is a good
way to
(“way” meaning “method”) exercise,
and
(Join your ideas) I
like it very much.,
In the beginning,
I am was
(Past tense here) just
a rookie, but after practicing
(You are okay, but stress that it was
“after you have practiced a lot) I practice a lot,
now I am have become
a good basketball player.
(“Have become” because you were not, before)
I like
playing
(Grammar rules here) basketball after
school, because there are many (Stress that
they are students, which is additional information useful to the
reader) students at the
basketball court, (A basketball
court is that concrete rectangular ground where you play)
people play there, so I can play with them and I can
improve myself.
(Improving yourself means making yourself better)
learn how to play better, I also can
also make friends
(Surely more than one friend)
by playing games with them.,
on In
(“in” and not “on”)
the holidays,
I always play basketball with my cousin,
and he is a good player, too.,
but However,
(Do not use “but” at the beginning of a sentence)
he likes to shoot
(“Shot” is a past tense. Use only present
tenses when followed by a “to”) by himself,
and I don’t like this.,
I like playing as
(“as” and not “in”) in a team,
which is good and nice.
Why
am do
(“do I” and not “am I”. You use “am I” as in
“Am I a good student ?”) I like
to play
basketball? It is because I
love the
(“the” as in “the WWE” or “The USA”)
NBA., first
I see first watched
(“watch” is better than “see”)
the NBA is
when I was in my
elementary school grade 6 so and
I began to
enjoy the sport, till
(You keep repeating “play basketball” too many times. Try “enjoy the
sport” and ”till” has the same meaning as until)
play basketball, to now.,
I always play basketball when I have time.,
Maybe I can play with you
too, teacher, but I think I will lose because you are too
tall. (A
person is “tall” and not “high”) high.