Drinking Milk

Do you know that milk will make you grow up? I was knew it when I was ten years old, because my mom was told me again and again.

Milk have a lot kind of the taste, some of them will very sweet, some will very good to drink, because that milk will not too sweet or too many grease, so it will good to drink. However I still not believe that milk can make me grow up fast. It can’t be, so I tell my mom that can I not to drink milk so many.

I like to drink the milk, but I don’t like to drink too much. I still can drink a little.

DRINKING MILK
　

Do you know that milk is very nutritious? I knew it since I was ten years old, because my mom reminded me time and again.

Milk has a lot of different flavors. Some of them are too sweet, while others are very delicious to drink, because they are not too sweet or too fattening. Therefore they are healthy.  However, I am still doubtful that milk can actually help me with my physical development. It can’t be true, so I tell my mom that I do not want to drink too much milk.

I like to drink milk, but I don’t like to drink excessively. I do not mind drinking just a little.

MILK

       Do you know that milk is very nutritious? (“nutritious” is an adjective. It means foods that are healthy and good for your body) will make you grow up? (“make you grow up” is not wrong, but it is a “childish” way of expressing yourself) I was (Grammar here) knew it when (“Since” meaning “from a certain time on” or From that time”) since I was ten years old, because my mom reminded (“remind” means to say thing again and again so one does not forget)  was told me again (“time and again” is better and more stylistic. However, you are not wrong) time and again.

       Milk has have (“milk” is an uncountable noun, so use has, and NOT have) a lot of different flavors. (“flavors” meaning “taste”. Try some new words) kind of the taste, Some of them will very are too (Your complaint here is that it is “too sweet”, I think) sweet, some will while others (“while others” means “on the other hand”) are very delicious (“delicious” is the word to use to describe how you feel about good food. “Good” is okay, but you have to move up)  good to drink, because that milk will they are not too sweet or too fattening. (“fattening” means foods that has too much fats in them, and too much of which is unhealthy. Do not say “grease”) many grease, so it will good to drink. Therefore they are healthy.  However, I am still not believe doubtful (“doubtful” meaning “not believing” or “been suspicious”) that milk can actually help me with my physical development. (“helping with your physical development” means making you grow strong, tall and healthy. “Physical” meaning your outward appearance, like been tall and so on. Learn to use some “big” words) make me grow up fast. It can’t be true, so I tell my mom that can I do not want to drink too much milk. so many.

       I like to drink the milk, but I don’t like to drink excessively. (“excessive” meaning “too much”)  too much. I still can do not mind (“do not mind” meaning that you “are not particularly against something”) drinking just a little.